2008年11月1日 星期六

阿倫來交作業了喔!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!訂正過了

1. 雖然Lily生來又瞎又聾,但她從來不氣餒 .

Although Lily born with blind and deaf, but she never discouraged.

2.她的故事證明了,我們只要努力必能成功。

Her story proves that that we can succeed as long as our we work hard.

3.昨天晚上我感覺有點不舒服。

I felt a little uncomfortable last night . (訂正錯誤- 知道了feel-felt last night 要放在句子的後面)

4.我的媽媽要我去看中醫師。

My mother asked me to see the Chinese medicine .

5.她說中藥比西藥天然。

She said that chinese medicine is natural than western medicine. (訂正錯誤 原本寫的than western medicine natural) .



訂正錯誤完畢 感謝小賀組長 耐心教導訂正 跟我說錯誤地方
真是好組長 I LOVE YOU

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